Hi folks, I've been working on a business idea and without giving anything away I'd like feedback on a brochure I've designed as one of my marketing tools for it. I'm interested in whether or not you understand what I'm offering and if you think the brochure is compelling.
Any other feedback is also appreciated.
Will this be a printed brochure or "ebrochure"? If it's printed, I'd expect some copy to go with it.
In general, I'd say it's not clear what you're doing. You show photos, yet are selling a "movie"?
Also, the tan, beige colors are very drab. They do say "old people" but not "fun" or "buy me".
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